Thetis, tears in her eyes, smiles bravely]. Achilles VALENTINE HERNANDEZ has been living a lie. If you stay here, with me, with your family, you'll have a long, peaceful life. It doesn't. She doesn't trust him. After the deaths of King Priam and King Agamemnon; Achilles and his Myrmidons seek to negotiate a peace treaty with Prince Hector; the new ruler of Troy. He thought it was you. : What life? Tomorrow we'll batter down the gates of Troy! : Achilles stroked his cheek and fingered his curls while the wet nurse came in and fed the baby. "i\\001/11oAnzmtkr4kjuqBoA6Co.xulA--C~Abbbbbbbbbb(bbbbb2001wrxs721n|{n\\177"+ (modern!restaurant!AU), . Just as she has been doing for years, keeping a faithful and respectful distance, never to interfere, never to voice what she longs for. But it was Achilles who entered the tent later that night, and for once he and Paris were alone, sharing food and wine and then the same bed, snuggled beneath a heavy fur and idly talking in a way they never had. : : Paris struggled over an answer for a moment, before choosing honesty. Go home, prince. Spock and Christine Chapel find themselves trapped in a shuttle where theyll have no other choice but to confront the feelings they have developing for one another. Another film to miss but unfortunately many will view it as feminist because a female is shown in a central role but in reality this film is just another opportunity to titillate male viewers and reinforce lie that women are all masochists who just need a strong male to subdue them sexually!. Euripides play The Trojan Women ably depicts the realities Trojan women experienced when they were sexually enslaved by the Greeks and whilst the Trojan war is fiction not fact Eurpidies play illuminates the realities for all women who are enslaved by men. If I hurt you, it's not what I wanted. : Achilles Still, I didnt really enjoy it, mainly due to the disingenuously exploitative attitude towards rape and Stockholm syndrome that the filmmakers exhibit in their depiction of the relationship between the characters of Briseis and Achilles. You fought well today. He wants to be remembered. Although this is pure conjecture. After encountering a mysterious entity at the park, Achilles' normal life started to change, thus turning him into its personal slave which he reluctantly chose. [Achilles stares at her, his eyes burning. If you go to Troy, no one will earn more glory than you. Achilles lets his captive think that she is in charge knowing that he can easily get the knife from her before she does any damage the better to assert his own power over her. "kode=\"nrgh@%{@hgrn\\000,f+hgrFudkFprui1jqluwV@. Umm it is morning. : Even in the movie he states he's not mortal. However, dark forces attempt to disrupt their success by targeting the Myrmidons most vulnerable member. I'll tell you a secret. Patroclus wants to go. Elpis was saved as a baby by the gods to be a great warrior of Troy. Priam He even tells Briseis the fact about gods envying men because they're mortal. Myrmidans Please consider turning it on! They've successfully made it this far with limited Ths story gets WAY better, I promise. They have inspired me to write this book. When she is captured by the invading Greeks and meets Achilles, what will happen? "Leave that," Hector ordered, returning his attention to the bed that held the sleeping body of his enemy. [Achilles groans, then sheathes his sword]. Odysseus Achilles from Troy FanFiction. Achilles I just realised that Cazz reviewed Troy for The F-Word in 2004: http://www.thefword.org.uk/reviews/2004/07/troy. What would happen to Troy? Myrmidans Drink some wine, make love to your wife. "Your goddess is a bitch and your god a whore!" When Briseis is taken by Agamemnon, Achilles springs to her defence, but she insists she will not have any men dying for her. Achilles First part is Achilles and his cousin and King Odysseus. Immortality! : Tell the king it can wait until morning. The spoils of war. Achilles The Iliad if properly shown would be a bloody and senseless war. Maybe you believe I, too, will carry your child.". You're my guest. he spat out defiantly. When the tent flaps opened and Hector entered, Paris felt a momentary pang of regret quickly replaced by relief. The smile that covered his aging face was enough for Achilles to inch forward to sneak a look at his new sibling. : They do not feel. : What if they fall inlove with each other? I haven't worn a seashell necklace since I was a boy. [to Priam] Briseis reflects on her complicated feelings towards Achilles. If you want to split me open, use your cock, Prince of Troy!". You are free. Maybe his mother told him. : Achilles [walks forward, lifts Priam] You're a good student, but you're not a Myrmidon yet. [Thetis reaches up to touch her son's cheek. You wouldn't know anything about the gods! You have courage. FIC: (Part Eight) "Winged Feet" : Just be aware that some of these stories are 6-7 years old, so the story quality will be quite different from my current published works. Briseis There is nothing more terrifying than waking up in an unfamiliar place with no idea of what happened. When I finally got round to seeing the 2004 film Troy by Wolfgang Petersen I expected to enjoy it, reputed as it is to have all these features. In life there are things that are said, and then there are those that remain unsaid. We will never be here again. I am publishing them here for any reading pleasure or inspiration that they might give you. : I do not own the characters. : : [to Hector's corpse] Tell the story from the beginning when Achilles, prince of Phtia met Patroclus, and its about how they became friends and then lovers, and how Patroclus was to the greatest worrier in history----his truly "Achilles' heel". They'll love you, and when you're gone they'll remember you. Briseis I say, that he was immortal when he arrived in Troy and he lost his immortality when he defiled the statue of Apollon and he knew it. A cheerleader and a theater boy meet at a New Years party. Finally, he moves towards her still apparently naked, the camera only showing the actor from the waist up before finally asking, Are you afraid, girl?. When a Princess Warrior meets Greek's mightiest warrior. : Achilles Give him to me. Achilles finds his mother, Thetis standing in the surf. i obviously am not homer and so the iliad is not mine don't sue me i have no money, Four times Achilles thought he had hated Hector, and the one time he realized he loved him (it was too late to turn back.). and our Are you afraid, Briseis? As the Hellespont swelled with the spring run-off and the Greek soldiers began drilling in preparation for their first sorties, Achilles announced to Paris and Briseis his plans to sail for Phtia before summer. The Briseis of Homer is a shadowy character; we learn little of her save that when she is taken away by Agamemnon she walks behind his men reluctant, every step, that when she returns to Achilles she mourns Patrocles as always kind and that Achilles claims to love her. Achilles His query can also be interpreted as an ostensible sympathy that is a form of power play. Achilles was a hero of the Trojan War. He wants to be remembered. Completed historical princess gods +17 more # 3 The Nymph by dcburke 3K 103 12 Kleomede survives the seige of Troy, but finds herself at the mercy of a stranger- a Greek captain. He's really cunning and is full of himself, but when it comes to his girl, he has a soft sp you and vinnie are the main characters Priam No. "Do you need such a large blade to make your mark? He does show flashes of sensitivity, but their relationship enables him to get even more in touch with his sadistic qualities. Petrified. She follow the ru Wattys 2022 Short Listed "I wouldn't sully my cock on you.". If killing is your only talent, that's your curse. Welcome to /r/FanTheories! If you sailed any slower the war would be over. Achilles I should not do this. All rights reserved. Achilles Achilles Achilles As she rushes through the palace trying to save her family, she thinks of Achilles and finds her heart is torn in two for her home and for the man she loves. I'll build monuments to victory on every island of Greece. I've seen them. Achilles' tone was gently mocking, his blue eyes sparkling from the reflection of the brazier. Have you no other weapon that might pierce me?" And I refuse to be a servant any longer. While we've done our best to make the core functionality of this site accessible without javascript, it will work better with it enabled. It's too early in the day to be killing princes. If I hurt you, it's not what I wanted. Unlike the anguished, Ariana had always had a weird life. She watched me me as I watch him. Her god-like features, voice like a bell and intoxicating smell like roses only stuns the mortals, but causes something bigger to the immortals. But if you don't release her, you'll never see home again. Will Selene and Achilles survive the War Inside Their Hearts after they meet again several years la Alexia Celesta Brewer. i think your god is afraid of me. TRIGGER WARNINGS INCLUDED For years, everything has been fake. : You have my word. We should leave. Achilles Achilles Briseis So it stands to reason that he might have lost a fight or two from which he could learn.He teaches his cousin and says "Never hesitate". Set the mood:https://youtu.be/5FGzi6iWO6E. "bCkjuqbb(bbbbbAqujkCqujk4yvroz.--/4xk|kxyk./4puot.--/bb(bCkjuq(bAqujkCqujk"+ Una drabble perfetta su una scena possibile della Achille/Briseide. : : PLEASE DONT DO THIS, BECAUSE I THINK IM IN LOVE WITH YOU. Please leave a comment. camelotslash-2 at qwest.net Elpis was saved as a baby by the gods to be a great warrior of Troy. Achilles It was me. Briseis POV. Aren't you afraid? : : Hector Achilles from Troy FanFiction. : patroclus gets sick of agamemnon and achilles constantly bickering.he creates a group chat as a half-assed bonding exercise.chaos ensues. Achilles : Briseis was far better at this task than her pampered cousin, lacking only the means to feed Paris' new son. Patroclus They'll love you, and when you're gone they'll remember you. You sack of wine! we are the ones you left behind or// the trail of women the heroes of Troy leave in their wake. "Yes," he said, "despite your brutal and thoughtless ways, I do love you.". Everything is more beautiful because we're doomed. Work Search: You'll die there. Greece got along fine before I was born. : We don't see a teacher for Achilles, we only see him being a soldier that wins wars for Agamemnon. Do it. He knew the locals who traded with the Achaeans were carefully watched and never completely trusted, and because of his own presence in Achilles' tent, no such stranger was ever allowed near. For sure, it adds to the tension. Achilles was something ineffable, bronze, bright. A great victory was won today, but that victory is not yours. Als Hektor, der Kronprinz von Troja, in griechische Kriegsgefangenschaft gert, wei er, dass er alles daran setzen muss, um unter den Feinden unerkannt zu bleiben und zu berleben. She is twin to Paris, sister to Hector, and Princess of Troy. : Fighting to protect her son and her mental health Briseis embarks on a journey to find peace for herself and her son. : Then he finally reassures his captive that he is not a rapist. Aphareus! Reviews are welcome! Love and hate combined? The Gods envy us. Myrmidans! When Daiyu is summoned with dozens of other girls to be the Emperor's concubine, she doesn't think *COMPLETED* All his life, Hector had lived by a code, and the code was simple: honour his inherited craft, love his woman, and defend the reputation of his coffee. : Second part is Achilles and Patroclus. : Set in modern days and other characters from the assassin creed world will be making an appearance. After this, they are shown gazing at each other, apparently besotted. : I'll carve "Agamemnon" in the stone. "bb~Ckjuq333__/i.kjuIxgnIsuxl4mtoxzYC1~A>87C1i/6Bi.loA93/o.zGkjuIxgni4kjuqC"+ : the past to prove it By:silverboar Paris whispered. Odysseus Priam? But when your children are dead, and their children after them, your name will be lost. Thetis No one will stop you. "After all, we are both," he said pointedly, "Princes of Troy. : : If for example Achilles was shown as the selfish, arrogant jerk he is in the original tale? As a teenager, Achilles was offered a choice: long life and obscurity, or short life and fame. [takes off helmet and throws it aside] Achilles was something ineffable, bronze, bright. So here is a question: if a modern depiction were not the Trojan Women, what if it were a truer to the mark version? . Why would a shepherd be standing so close outside the tent of Achilles? She only knew things were going downhill from there. : Would it be too much? Should I be? : My lord, Agamemnon requests your presence. Troy (2004) -- The Forgotten Queen: The Fall of TroyThe Red Baron (2008) -- The Hawks of War: A Story of Air Combat in WW1 and of the Legendary Jasta 1FBI: Most Wanted -- Under the Waves, Under the SunMZDS/The Untamed -- What Price Do The Children Pay?Narnia/LOTR -- A Stranger in a Strange LandTennis RPF -- Yes, Im One of Those Murrays. Achilles by Mr.Loda8. The right time to strike. "+=128;x+=String.fromCharCode(c)}kode=x" "It isn't important.". Hector had come to take him home to Troy! Val was a cunning, ambitious young demigod. For now. The untold story of Achilles's and the daughter of Aphrodite. : PLE AchillesxOC He will not stop until he rescues Patroclus from the clutches of Thanatos, and if he doesn't, he will run down the realm of Hades. That was normal for any demigod of course, the gods were always cruel. Achilles : Aedia and Patroclus first meet during the spring of 1190BC, three years before the Trojan war. Or: Patroclus takes Achilles' armor and fights without telling him. he's better than all the Greeks. A wet nurse was found for the baby among the camp followers of the Myrmidons, and this woman joined the two Trojans in Achilles' tent. When she is captured by the invading Greeks and meets Achilles, what will happen? Thetis Please consider turning it on! Achilles My lord. Achilles slew Mynes and the brothers of Briseis (children of Briseus), then received her as his war prize. They say your mother was an immortal godess. It hadn't occurred to him that his brother might kill the father of his son. Achilles ", "Would it? - Yes, my sweet. : : Many. It will be a great help to know what everyone likes and what they dont like about this fic. Achilles, the greatest warrior who ever lived, died at the hands of Paris at the battle of Troy, his legend cemented in what would be known as the greatest wars ever waged. Move quickly, so I don't have to kill an unarmed man.". "n{72001}ruy|7nmxtFnmxtD+mxl~vnw}7\\000{r}n1+e1Ej)q{noFee+evjru}xCljvnux}|u"+ : When she is captured by the invading Greeks and meets Achilles, what will happen? d He could easily order one of his women slaves to do this; surely, another womens care at such a time would be comforting? Do you know what's waiting beyond that beach? Why did you choose this life? : Something they don't teach you in your temple. Then, Briseis follows the example of her forerunner in the 1962 film The Fury of Achilles and, breaking the first law of feminine self-defence, threatens him with a knife. "I'm not sure if that's a compliment, but thanks." Go. She sees a shell that she likes and stoops down to pick it up] The city of Troy is falling to the Greek army, and Briseis must find a way out before it is too late. you crave the applause, yet hate the attention Briseis POV. What if Achilles caught the arrowand he survived? : The lead up to the Trojan war and the aftermath that ensues. The child spent some days nestled in Paris' arms, suckling at his swollen breasts. As she rushes through the palace trying to save her family, she thinks of Achilles and finds her heart is torn in two for her home and for the man she loves. He warns her that they should take advantage of the moment and (presumably) strips again, for when we next see him he is naked again. We men are wretched things. Will our favourite hero of Olympus sur Patroclus is the son and only child from a wealthy man, Patroclus was average at about everything his father tried to put him in; He was never strong enough, He was neve Patrochilles AU Would you leave Troy? Achilles lets his captive think that she is in charge the better to assert his own power over her, Compilation 2001-2022 The F-Word. Will he take advantage of her? When Athelia woke up as an amnesiac on a field trip she wasnt sure what was going on. And you know this, mother? And Greece will remain Greece long after I am gone. Briseis He goes in to wash, removing his toga/denim mini skirt and insensitively stripping naked in front of the priestess Briseis. Achilles Where does it end? The words hurt her]. Achilles smiled. : Achilles : The two lost themselves for a time in this pleasure, drunk with it, Achilles' eyes glazing over and his broad chest heaving. If she is reluctant to leave him, it may be a case of better the devil you know more than anything else. Ah, Perhaps you didn't notice. Achilles opens his eyes]. : : : Patroclus After encountering a mysterious entity at the park, Achilles' normal life started to change, thus turning him into its personal slave which he reluctantly chose. Carter Jones, the school nerd, and Killian WARNING- READ THE *BEFORE YOU READ* Achilles : Achilles : She gives an ambiguous answer showing spirit: Should I be? Some mutual staring follows to indicate the first stages of falling in love. A new twist on the Twilight tale.Goes to a very strange place around chapter 8. She believes in Gods. . A verbal skirmish follows, during which she upbraids him for the murder of the priests and he throws some water at her. : Achilles would do anything to get Patroclus back, and he will. Achilles: The Trojan War. After falling for her captor, Briseis loses any agency she may have had. Orphaned Rosemary Adams manages to find a family only to be tossed aside when she's wrongly accused of vandalism. A warrior weaved with divinity, goddesses sons are as beautiful and cruel as their mothers. ", Hector nearly smiled. Paris reached for the clothing he had discarded earlier by the bed. Achilles admires Hector. Filming & Production Privacy Policy. That is more than can be said for anyone else in Troy.. I mean you Victoria. Him not so much. A dog has that kind of courage. After Troy burns, Achilles is given a chance to right his wrongs. Actually, Im coming back to post here in that I have written a short review of the film on Amazon.com raising the issues I covered in much more detail here, which has proved unpopular, as you can imagine, but I do want to keep a feminist point of view of this tawdry epic visible on a general website, and I wondered if people would click the Helpful Review button? Some are finished stories from abandoned fandoms. 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